This is a story that I just kinda made up one day. It
definitely has a classic feel to it, though.
The Watchdog
By: Amanda L. Bray - © 2003
It was very late, nearly ten o'clock, and Hallie
Sullivan was just leaving her friend Stacey’s house. Her
mother had told her to be home by ten and if she left now
she would have just enough time to walk home.
Just as she was leaving the house she heard her
friend’s mother say, “Hallie, why don't you wait until I
get my coat and shoes and I'll drive you home. I hate to
think of you walking after dark.”
“That’s ok, Mrs. Jameson”, Hallie called
back, “It’s not far. I can cut through the wheat fields and
get there even faster.”
“Alright, Hallie. Just be careful. Call me when you
get home.”
“Yes, Mrs. Jameson.”
Hallie hurriedly said goodbye to Stacey and opened
the door to leave, just then an old gravelly voice said in
her ear “Look out for the watchdog.”
She turned and saw Stacey’s grandfather Morrison
standing beside her.
“The who?” she asked.
“The watchdog.” the old man replied “I heard him
tonight. The howls he makes when he’s out a-huntin. Look
out for the watchdog!”
“Oh pop!” said Mrs. Jameson, coming in from the
kitchen, “Let the girl go. No sense in scaring her with
another silly story of yours.”
“Look out!” he whispered, winking, as he shut the
door.
That was weird, Hallie thought. Then again,
Stacey’s grandfather was kind of strange. He was a genuine
Indian and told many strange stories and myths. Hallie’s
dad said he was getting Alzheimer’s and he told the stories
because they were all he could remember. Hallie herself
wasn't so sure. He seemed to still have his wits about him,
although he did smell funny, and sometimes did odd things
like mixing milk with his orange juice.
Eh, Hallie thought, Let’s just get home.
She stepped off the porch and walked down the front
path. Just then a lonely howl came floating across the
field of wheat to her left. “Look out for the watchdog!”
She heard the old man’s voice in her head.
“He’s just a senile old man.” She said to
herself “What does he know?”
She stepped into the field and started across.
By now, it was very, very late indeed. It was a
dark new moon night. The sky was cloudy, hiding all but the
brightest of the stars. The unceasing Kansas wind blew
through the wheat, sounding like a thousand whispering
voices. She could see the lights of her house across the
large field and it brought her a bit of comfort. It had
been raining earlier in the week, making the way through a
bit muddy, but not enough to slow Hallie down-- not much
anyway.
She walked through the rows of wheat, listening to
the mud suck at her shoes- step, lift, step, lift, step,
lift. Squoosh. Shluck! Squoosh. Shluck! Squoosh. Shluck!
The sound made her giggle. She walked faster. Now the sound
went squeesh-shuck-squeesh-shuck-squeesh-shuck! She was
enjoying herself quite a bit and started singing “I may
never march in the infantry!” Squoosh-shluck! “Ride in the
cavalry” Squoosh-shluck! “Shoot the-”
Another howl came floating on the wind towards her.
The song died on her lips and for a moment she stood
perfectly still. The howl came again, low and mournful,
like an animal in great pain. Yet a third howl came. This
one sounded closer, like the dog was just on the other side
of the field.
Hallie was beginning to feel more than a little
scared now. She was afraid of dogs to begin with, and this
one sounded big. She put her head down and began to walk
quickly through the field, no longer enjoying the sound of
the mud.
The field seemed to have grown. No matter how long
or fast she walked, she didn't seem to be getting any
closer to her house. The clouds were getting thicker and
darker and every once in a while a low, threatening peal of
thunder would roll across the ground. The wind started to
pick up, whistling and moaning through the stalks. It was
starting to get cold. Hallie pulled her little pink jacket
close and tied its hood under her chin.
Lightning suddenly lit up the entire field. Hallie
jumped. She hugged herself and walked even faster through
the muck. She heard yet another howl. Now it didn't sound
hurt or sad. It sounded angry-- and closer. Too close for
Hallie’s own comfort. Thunder BOOMED against the sky and
Hallie screamed. She was getting very scared now. She hated
storms almost as much as she did dogs.
Another howl rang through the field, seeming to
come from right next to her. The wind picked up. It sounded
like angry warning voices. Another howl came, loud, and
angry. Hallie heard a steady sucking noise coming from her
left. They sounded like footsteps. The wind whistled, “Look
out for the watchdog! Look out, Hallie! The watchdog! Look
out!”
Hallie started to run. The sucking noise was behind
her now, chasing her. “Look out! Look out!” the wind said.
Now the howls seemed to be coming from everywhere,
surrounding the frightened girl. The lightning flashed and
the thunder roared and the wind screamed “The watchdog! The
watchdog! Look out!”.
Suddenly, Hallie’s shoe sank into the mud and she
fell to her knees. As she struggled to get up, she heard a
low growl from in front of her. She stopped, listening. The
growl came again. She peered between the shafts of wheat
and saw a pair of large, red, glowing eyes. The eyes
growled, deep and menacing. Hallie was so frightened she
couldn't move. She couldn't speak. Each breath whistled
painfully down her windpipe and her stomach was tied in
knots.
She heard the wheat rustle. The lightning flashed
and in its brief light, she saw what was attached to those
eyes. The biggest, blackest dog she had ever seen in her
life was walking through the wheat towards her. His fur was
long and shaggy, and his teeth were bigger than any teeth
had a right to be.
Suddenly, the great beast barked loudly and leapt
into the air towards her. Hallie screamed and curled
herself into a ball. The dog jumped over her and landed on
top of something with a muffled thud. Hallie heard a
surprised shout and turned to see what had happened.
The dog had a tall, muscular man pinned to the
ground. Lightning reflected off the large knife he had
clutched in his right hand. In the next flash of light, she
saw the dog put its teeth around the man’s throat. Then it
stopped, looked back at her and growled, its teeth dripping
with saliva. Hallie quickly turned back around. By now, she
was too shocked to do anything else. The man’s screams were
suddenly cut off short.
Hallie heard the dog coming up behind her. What’s
he doing?! She thought. The dog grabbed the back of her
jacket and pulled her to her feet. Then it left for a
moment. When it came back, it had her missing tennis shoe
in her mouth. He dropped it at her feet and waited while
she put it on.
“Good dog” she murmured nervously.
The dog started walking towards Hallie’s house. Now
that it was very close to her, she could see that it was
much larger than she thought. Its huge, shaggy head came
nearly to her shoulder and his feet were almost bigger than
her own. The dog led her all the way home, matching her
stride. Once, when she stumbled, the dog stepped under her,
catching her fall.
She saw a bobbing light ahead and heard her father
yelling “Hallie! Hallie! Where are you?”
“Daddy!” she cried.
She ran toward him and he caught her up in his
arms. She was bawling like a baby, but she didn’t care.
“Hallie, what happened?”
“Oh daddy,” she said in a tear-choked voice, “A man
tried to hurt me with a knife, but that dog saved me!” She
pointed behind her.
“What dog, sweetie?”
Hallie turned around. The dog was gone. It had
vanished.
“I think it’s time we went inside.” her father said.
He brought her inside and she told her mother what
had happened. Her mom gave her a bath, took her
temperature, and tucked her into her bed. Just before,
Hallie fell asleep, she heard a mournful howl, very far
away, but she was no longer scared.
In the morning, she woke up to here her parents
talking downstairs.
“The police found the body of an escaped mental
patient in the eastern part of the field.” her dad
said. “He had a knife with him. It must have been the man
Hallie saw last night.”
“Oh my” said her mother, “Well, we won’t be letting
her walk home through the fields anymore. Stacey’s mother
called this morning and felt just awful. I took me ten
minutes to get her calmed down.”
“It was the strangest thing,” her father
continued, “The man’s throat had been ripped out. I mean
the teeth marks were huge.”
“Didn't Hallie say that she saw a dog last night?”
her mother asked.
“Oh Ellen,” said her father, “That dog would have
to have been the size of a Shetland pony to fit into those
teeth. It’s just not logical.”
Hallie listened and grinned. She knew what had made
those prints. She rolled over and went back to sleep.
Hallie never walked through the fields at night
again. She never forgot the dog and the dog never forgot
her. Sometimes, when it was late and she was all alone and
scared, a low howl would come in on the wind. The howl of
the Watchdog.
RED INDIAN BRIDGE AND OTHER TALES
Hi, my name is Manda. I have submitted other stories to
this sight, the main one being "Vermilion House". I put it
under a different name because I didn't want my parents to
find it.
Anyway, this story actually comes from my sister, Layne.
If
you've read Vermilion House, you'll remember her as the one
who "wouldn't know a "ghost" if it were dancing on the tip
of her nose." Well, after my mother found this site and
showed everyone (and I mean everyone!) my story, Layne was
able to be more comfortable with what was happening in our
home and actually decided to start going on some "ghost
hunts" with her friends. These are the stories of what
happened on those haunts.
RED INDIAN BRIDGE
Last summer, Layne's friend Matt told her this story:
"In the beginning of the eighteenth century, this area
was still inhabited by the Kickapoo Indians (really I
didn't make that name up). The settlers that were coming to
the area were first afraid of the Indians, but after a few
years regarded them mostly as a nuisance. Finally, about
ten years after officially naming our small town, the town
people got tired of the Indians. One night, while the tribe
was sleeping, the men of the town burned out the Indian's
camp. They killed every Indian they came in contact with,
even the babies. They chased the rest into the woods where
they were eventually hunted down and "gotten rid of". One
lone Indian remained. I'm not sure why he was allowed to
live, maybe he had some importance in the tribe or
something. He was very old, so maybe they figured he was
harmless and would die on his own anyway.
The old Indian built a covered bridge over a small creek
and made it his home. He survived by trapping small animals
and stealing a chicken or a few eggs from a neighboring
farm now and then. The farmers didn't seem to really notice
the missing poultry or perhaps wrote it off as coyotes or
foxes.
A few years after the tribe was massacred, an unmarried
town girl was found by her mother to be "with child." Her
sin being found out, the girl broke down in tears and told
her mother that she hadn't done anything wrong, but had
actually been raped and was afraid to say anything. When
asked who her attacker was the girl pointed her finger
toward the woods and cried "That heathen Indian in the
woods!"
The girl's father went out to the old Indian's bridge and
dragged the bewildered man to town. He told the preacher
and mayor what had happened and it was decided the Indian
was to be hung. The old man wasn't even allowed to defend
himself! A group of men took the Indian to his bridge and
hung him from the rafters. As further punishment, his body
was not buried and instead was left hanging. The birds and
coyotes picked at it until there was nothing left but
bones. Soon these too fell and were dragged away. There was
nothing left of the old man but dust and a frayed bit of
rope."
Now Red Indian Bridge is said to be haunted by the ghost
of the old Indian.
After my sister heard this, she immediately decided that
they would go out to the bridge. So Layne, Matt, and
Layne's friend Olivia piled into Layne's car and took off.
It was a very clear night with a full moon, you know one
of those perfectly warm delicious summer nights? They drove
to the bridge which, as it turned out, wasn't far from the
cemetery where our grandfather is buried.
They parked at one end of the bridge. By now, Olivia
(who is a bit "chicken") had decided she would just wait in
the car. After a bit of teasing, Matt and Layne decided to
go by themselves.
Now this bridge is very old and there is a giant hole in
the middle of it for almost the entire length of the
bridge. Because of the hole, Layne had to walk on one side
of the bridge and Matt on the other. There was a space of
about five feet between them.
They walked across the bridge and nothing happened. It
was just an old beat-up bridge!
Layne turned to Matt and said "Hey, I thought this was
supposed to be scary!"
Matt looked at her and said "Well, we still have to go
back across. The scary stuff doesn't happen until then."
As, they were walking back across, Layne was just
beginning to think that Matt was playing a trick on her
when she felt something brush her face. It couldn't have
been Matt because he was on the other side of the hole. She
passed it off as a bug, but a moment later began to feel
like something was behind her. She saw Matt start to walk a
little faster and thought maybe he was feeling the same
thing.
By the time, they had gotten off of the bridge, they were
running and Layne was too terrified to look behind her.
And for good reason........
When they got to the car, Olivia was huddled in the
passenger seat crying and shaking. After they had gotten
back on the road and she had calmed down, Layne asked her
what had happened.
Olivia said," I was watching you guys come back across
and I saw something black between you, but the hole is
there, so I knew it wasn't a person."
She went on to say, that while only Matt and Layne
walked out of the bridge, the full moon revealed THREE
person-shaped shadows on the road behind them........
THE UNFAITHFUL
Another of Layne's ghost hunts involved the story of a
man whose girlfriend found out he was cheating on her with
her sister. Neither woman had known he was seducing the
other. After the man's antics were found out, the two
sisters plotted against him. The elder sister planned to
meet the man in the barn near the edge of her family's
farm. Little did the man know, the younger sister was also
there, hiding in a stall. Once inside, the women attacked
the man and hung him from the rafters of the barn. They
disposed of the body in a nearby creek, but for some
reason, left the rope hanging where it was.
Layne, Matt, and about four other teens left after
telling me this story to go and find the barn where this
was supposed to have happened. It was said that the noose
was still hanging in the barn.
The next morning, I was sitting at my computer, when I
heard this cold cold voice that sent shivers up and down my
spine. It was coming from the living room. I walked in and
saw Layne and our "baby" sister, Elizabeth, sitting on the
floor and staring at Layne's Pressman (tape recorder) in
shock. I asked what was wrong.
Layne said that the night before, they had gone to the
barn and she had taken the tape recorder and let it run
while they were out there. They had found a rope in the
barn, but figured it was just a prank. She returned home
disappointed that nothing came of the trip. Then, in the
morning, she remembered the Pressman and took it out to
listen to it.
In the tape, you can hear Layne and her friends talking
and joking around, just having a good time. There were only
two girls in the group. As the tape plays, you can hear
Layne and the other girl talking about a party that
happened a couple of weeks before. In the middle of the
conversation, there is a slight fluttery staticy noise,
but you can still hear the girls, so you know it wasn't
them making the noise.
When Layne slowed the tape down and turned up the volume,
the fluttery "noise" disappeared. Instead a cold feminine
whisper came floating out of the tiny speakers
" I'm waiting for you..." It said.
Contact me here: Manda_B82@yahoo.com
Submitted From: Amanda, IL, USA