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THE RIVER
Before you read this story you should know that
I am a firm believer in the supernatural and
have had more than just this experience in my
life.
In the summer of this year, I was sitting alone
in my house, bored out of my mind because all of
my friends were out of town. Suddenly, I decided
that it might be a neat idea to ride my bike to
the nearby park and hang out there.
So I got my bike and rode over there. Seeing
that no sports teams were having practices, I
found myself, once again, alone. Deeply
depressed, I wandered across the street and went
down to the river that ran alongside the road.
People aren't supposed to go down there, but I
had nothing else to do and nowhere else to go.
I sat down on a rock on the bank and closed my
eyes, listening to the sound of the water. For
some reason, I felt like someone else was there
with me. You know, that eerie feeling when you
think someone is watching you? Anyway, I kept my
eyes closed and tried to think about what might
have caused this. I found that the more I
thought about it, the worse the feeling got. I
started to hear splashing noises in the water.
Of course, that isn't really anything special
when sitting next to a river, but this sounded
like someone was trying to swim. It sounded like
somebody was drowning.
I made the move to get up, I just got this gut
feeling that I shouldn't be there anymore. But
as I tried to stand, something came up out of
the water and grabbed my ankles, dragging me
under!
This river has a pretty violent current and I
have to admit, I was scared out of my wits.
Strangely, instead of pulling me downstream, the
current was pulling me down towards the
riverbed. I tried to swim to the surface, but
whatever had me wasn't letting go, and I
couldn't hold my breath any longer. Even knowing
that you shouldn't take a breath under water
doesn't make it any easier when trying to resist
the temptation. I opened my mouth and took in a
lung full of water. As soon as I did, everything
got dark and quiet. I forced my eyes open and
looked around me only to see dead bodies
floating in a circle around me!
Suddenly, I was back on land, sitting on the
rock, completely dry. But for some reason, I
couldn't breathe. I managed to get enough air to
cough and out came all of this water! I kept
coughing and spitting out water. I heard this
voice coming from somewhere out in the middle of
the river telling me to leave, and I didn't
question it. I left the river, went back to the
park to get my bike, and peddled home as fast as
I could, spitting out water and coughing the
whole time.
I did a little digging around after I got home
and found that numerous cars had driven off of
the road and into the river back when the
pavement was level with the riverbed. In heavy
rains the river would swell and flood the road.
Some people have swerved off the road and into
the river, drowning.
I don't go near that river anymore and I advise
others not to as well. I'm not sure what the
whole episode meant, or why it happened to me,
but I hope that I never have to go near that
general area ever, ever again.
Submitted From: Tiffany Smith, Alaska, USA
Contact me here: jerichosqueen@hotmail.com